Here's the whole series, in what I think the order should be. (note I've also re-edited the second shot to fit the mood of the others)
As I said before, in case you missed it, the series is based around "Loss" and any feelings or actions evoked by it. Other than that it's open to the viewers interpretation of what they personally see and feel is happening in the images.
Any suggestions if I should change the order, or anything else for that matter?
3 comments:
I feel like my eyes want to look at the series bottom up, maybe try reversing the order?
Interesting concept by the way. Very open to psychoanalysis. Ha ha!
I think this series is great, well done, would maybe have liked to see the last shot with the girl in the middle like the rest of the series.....unless she's off centre for a reason?
Thanks Craig, I think when I shot it the composition seemed a little stiff and awkward with her in the centre for the last image. Just because there was nothing to frame her like in the other shots. So I balanced her figure with the channel marker off in the distance to the left.
Coming back to it now, I'm thinking you're right. I might crop it to centre her and submit it as an alternative.
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